100-word challenge … but how can something so tiny…

Beep, beep, went my alarm, it was 6:00, time for my morning run. I slowly dragged myself out of bed, and left the house. It was 6:45 by the time I reached my favourite park it was just me by myself, or so I thought. In the shadows hiding behind the thick, brown, old tree there was a creature, a petite, filthy and yellow creature. My spine shivered as I heard it calling Marcus, Marcus.  as I looked around, when I spotted it I let out a silent scream then I bolted down the street as I thought but how could something so tiny speak.

4 Comments

    • indigo2014

      This was…different. I liked some sentences like ” In the shadows hiding behind the thick, brown, old tree there was a creature, a petite, filthy and yellow creature.” It was really amazing. Amazingly gross. Good job anyway! Keep writing.
      Indi,

  1. Mrs. Pistilli

    Hi Ethan-
    I enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge response. You use very descriptive language, keep up the good work.

    Mrs. Pistilli
    Technology Teacher
    St. Charles, IL

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