100-word challenge … but how can something so tiny…

Beep, beep, went my alarm, it was 6:00, time for my morning run. I slowly dragged myself out of bed, and left the house. It was 6:45 by the time I reached my favourite park it was just me by myself, or so I thought. In the shadows hiding behind the thick, brown, old tree there was a creature, a petite, filthy and yellow creature. My spine shivered as I heard it calling Marcus, Marcus.  as I looked around, when I spotted it I let out a silent scream then I bolted down the street as I thought but how could something so tiny speak.

4 Responses

  1. quinn2016 at |

    I liked the language and the detail you put into everything.

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    1. indigo2014 at |

      This was…different. I liked some sentences like ” In the shadows hiding behind the thick, brown, old tree there was a creature, a petite, filthy and yellow creature.” It was really amazing. Amazingly gross. Good job anyway! Keep writing.
      Indi,

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  2. Mrs. Pistilli at |

    Hi Ethan-
    I enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge response. You use very descriptive language, keep up the good work.

    Mrs. Pistilli
    Technology Teacher
    St. Charles, IL

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  3. ryanc2016 at |

    good job!
    i liked how you did detail i like how you did word choice

    Reply

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