100 Word Challenge Hard Beautiful Brown Worried Camera

“Click” the door made little sound as Matthew inched the door open. He couldn’t make a sound or else mr and mrs Doob would wake up. The door was hard but beautiful, but then the moment he walked in the door… “Flash” a bright light shined in his face caught on camera mr Doob wishpered a Evil smile on his face. When Matthew got home his mum told him that he would have 2 months grounded. In his dull and peti room Matthew looked out the window at the brown trees, while his mother sat worried about him. She thought what can I do about my son.

3 Responses

  1. ryanc2016 at |

    Great job i liked how you put alot of Word choice and yesah

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  2. lilly2014 at |

    Hi Ethan
    I liked how you described the door as hard and beautiful.
    Lilly

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  3. estella2016 at |

    Great Job! I really found your idea interesting and I love how you spread out the required words around the text!

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