Venice Canals

The mossy wall continues in the cool deep blue water

The golden sun reflects off the shiny clear blue water

The peaceful wind whistles against the rippling water

The ripples against the water are like raindrops hitting a pool

I brush my hand against the water’s surface and sigh in relaxation

Where are they?

Peaceful wind whistles

Wind Whistles


2 Responses

  1. ryanc2016 at |

    i like how you had a simile in there but i think you should of had personification but i know that this is one of your old pieces right?


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